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Should Junk Food Be Banned from School Parties and Lunches?


Should junk food with dreadful ingredients be banned from special occasions like parties at school? Should they be banned from everyday events like school lunches? There are very many reasons to prove so. One reason is because they make children unhealthy, and more likely to get a disease. Another reason is because if they eat a lot of junk food, kids will get into the habit of eating it, and might even teach their own kids to eat it. Finally, if stores have most customers who are buying their junk food, they might stop selling the healthy foods that some families believe in buying. So if parents start to bring junky food and pastries into their children's parties, such as Halloween parties and Valentines Day parties, kids at school could force their parents to buy them these horrid treats. We don't want our community to be filled with unhealthy citizens! However, foods such as pizza, cake, cupcakes, and other items that aren't particularly good for you, can still be enjoyed at very special occasions like birthday parties, weddings, and other events. But, eating bad foods every day at lunch should be banned. Let's talk about how starting out unhealthy can really impact everyone in their futures.

One reason why this is correct is because people are more likely to get a disease due to unhealthy eating. For example, in the movie, “Super size Me”, the man tries to eat McDonald's for 30 days. In the end, he is told that he doubled his risk of heart problems and lung problems. That's one way to prove our reasoning. Another reason why this is correct is because if children eat a lot of junk food, they will start to believe in this habit. They most likely will make their own kids eat unhealthy. Did you know that in some private schools, even bringing lunches that contain any different sugar other than natural sugar would be banned? And for birthday parties, kids bring in fruits or vegetables. Isn't that great? One final reason has something to do sores. If a store gets customers who are only interested in buying junky foods, chances are, the store will not be selling healthy items much longer. The worst part is that some families might want to eat only healthy foods. If stores don't sell good items, then what about healthy eaters? Stores are only interested in getting money. Well, enough about banning junk food.

Well, we can't forget that junk foods won't ever be banned for good. Nobody will ever stop eating items such as candy, pizza, cupcakes, or cake. These great tasting foods can still be enjoyed at events like birthdays. For example, at a classic birthday party, pizza will be eaten. Also, chances are, cake or cupcakes will be enjoyed. But to eat these items very frequently is not a good idea. The same goes for occasions like weddings. Now, let's be honest. Nobody goes to a wedding every day. Eating a piece of wedding cake once every year or 2 won't hurt you.

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